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Where did i make my mistake where did i go wrong why does it seem like you keep trying to push me away I didnt mean to hurt you in anyway If i did im sorry i apolozie for what ive done please dont take your love away please stay with me i need you here with me I admit i did wrong i should have never left you i left because I'm afraid you'll think less of me, that you'll laugh, and your laugh would kill me. I'm afraid that deep-down I'm nothing and that you will see this and reject me. so please stay with me

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Dylan Smith

Date: 5/1/2011 10:43:00 AM

Great poem lots of emotion

Samantha Drummond

Date: 4/8/2011 4:27:00 PM

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