Listen

Darkness all around me
No one can listen my plea
nothing to control nothing to see
A strange force is driving my heart
My heart is beating high upon a fear
Could have stopped but very well driven
And total agony but still alive
Thanks to this strange force
Which I coudn't see
From where it may be
Its impact shattered me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 26, 2010 at 11:37 AM
Hello Khalid, Welcome to Poetry Soup, I enjoyed reading you this morning. Lots of deep feelings in this one today. Keep your thoughts flowing As Always, Shar
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