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Listen to them, for I am as they say I want to be forgotten with nothing coming my way My world has left me, therefore I cannot go on I want true happiness but it is now gone Victory against this war I will have But my spirit will be forever in halve Nothing to change what I have become My soul now empty, my heart is so numb

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 5/29/2009 11:39:00 AM
I give you great credit for the rhymes: "half and halve." I NEVER would have thought of that. I wish I did. This is moody and introspective, but it conveys it's emotions well. Thank you for your kindness regarding my little poems. I do appreciate it! Regards, GK
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Date: 5/29/2009 7:42:00 AM
I never will see it... for it aint the truth...
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