Lisbon

Lisboa é boa*. Yeah, Lisbon is good at very long distance of dreams. The shivering traveler pulls up his hood: it seems that the traveller misunderstood what’s autumn in Portugal. Streams of water run volubly down the steep streets, the wind searches pockets and sleeve, the sheets hung to dry do not differ from sheets of rain… That’s what happens when fantasy meets reality and both leave. (port.) Lisbon is good.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/10/2019 2:25:00 PM

I visited there there in May and it was lovely Kurt. I enjoyed your autumn poem very much. I am away right now in Hilo watching my granddaughters while they are out of school. I will catch up with comments when I return.xxoo

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 10/10/2019 5:25:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. Best wishes to you and your granddaughters)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/8/2019 1:34:00 PM

Hello Kurt Ravidas, the traveler should dress warmer for Lisbon in autumn. Also to wear raincoat and boots to keep the feet dry. have a nice day my friend,

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 10/10/2019 2:56:00 AM

Not very long. Portugal was fine except for the weather. Thank you, Darlene)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/9/2019 9:28:00 AM

Hello Kurt, did you enjoy Lisbon? How long were you there? Have a nice day my friend.

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 10/8/2019 2:09:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene. Next time I'll take your advice)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/8/2019 5:35:00 AM

Enjoyed the imagery, Kurt!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 10/8/2019 9:15:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. Actually, I loved Lisbon)