Lisa

Lisa' heart has been stomped on
lisa has been rejected many time's
lisa had almost given up on love
then lisa meet's mark in the park
is mark giong to notice her
or walk on bye
Lisa heart start's thobbing
lisa hand's are sweating
Lisa mouth is very dry
Lisa is in awe by his good look's
does mark like his girl alittle nerdy?
alittle dorky? alittle corky?
Mark is flaltered but
preoccupied by her
flaming red hair both
wondering if fringe benefit's
in the air
Lisa beauty is intoxicating
they kiss and go hand in hand
out of the park
well their love last forever?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/16/2012 5:08:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Bradley. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 08/16/2012
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Date: 8/16/2012 2:31:00 PM
Thank You Carol for the warm welcome, I away's read the other poet's poetry everyone has something different and it a great joy to take it all in. and i truly enjoy poetry soup, take care i am going to see what turn's everyone on,
Date: 8/14/2012 7:41:00 AM
I feel like Lisa at times... love your poem....pd
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Date: 8/14/2012 10:20:00 AM
Thank You for reading and you input
Date: 8/14/2012 5:29:00 AM
Happy for Lisa - well written Bradley, like it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Welcome to P-Soup, have fun with poetry. :)
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Date: 8/14/2012 5:34:00 AM
Thank You Anne-Lise
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