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Liquid State

LIQUID STATE numb brain cauterised thoughts melt liquidised goodbye gentle globe may you never again drown in snow all will miss the elegance of your despair no more howling like ovens or crying out prayers numb brain cauterised thoughts melt liquidised vainglorious heart hanging death draining where the sky feels more remote than the realms of ageing dreams the staircase to ultimate bliss is now flowing out of state commission what else can I say as blue armies draw closer and life pulsates like a tadpole in my brains liquid state © Kim van Breda—8 July 2015

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Date: 7/11/2015 3:03:00 PM
Well my friend, I read this 3 times to let it soak in and I STILL cannot interpret this gem (sign of a great poem) Your best effort so far in my humble opinion...
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