Liquid Love

all I wish for is to be loved by you
all I ask is you treat me with meaning
I am tired of feeling shades of blue
I am losing you despite all my scheming
you are only mine when I am dreaming

you have elected another devotee
you have chosen liquid poison over me
I will love you regardless of my pain
though a conscious mind pleads me to flee
one look at your splendour, bliss I will feign

April 18, 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Devnath  Avatar
April 21, 2012 at 1:28 PM
A great sacrifice penned, winning goal ahead indeed. Loved always, bl
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 7:37 AM
The sun is shining bright here this morning in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and excellent writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Diana. Love, Carol
Rhinem Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 2:21 PM
Smile ~ Your Such A Little Drama Queeen * Come Here, Let Me Kisss You ~ My Love, Always, John!:) ~
Andresen Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 1:21 PM
Thank you Diana-Marie, well done. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Aul Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 1:07 PM
Nicely written.........George
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