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Liquid Fire

Sweet day, so cool, so calm, so bright
My love I anticipate tonight with much delight

Soft speech, smooth touch, the warmth of your body
More radiant than summer’s sunbeams, are you to me

Rouse my sacred womanhood with fire and flame
Throughout the night whilst I scream your name

My strong man, my loving man, my man whom I adore
Fulfill my deepest desires - give me more, more, more…..

Oh sweet incendiary show me thy art
Upon this gracious body and inside my heart

That thirsts of love with brim-filled bowels of fierce desire
That by mornings light I’ll have drained every drop of your liquid fire!

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FJ Thomas

Date: 5/2/2018 10:48:00 PM

Janice let me know when you decide to post something! :D

FJ Thomas

Date: 5/1/2018 5:30:00 PM

Oh my flipping goodness fire is right! Janice I don't even know how I found this but I'm so glad I did! AWESOMENESS!

Janice Scott
Date: 5/2/2018 7:56:00 PM

FJ thank you so much! It has been a long while since I've written anything. Your comment today has inspired me to get back to writing!

Janice Scott

Date: 7/8/2009 1:15:00 PM

Thanks so much guys, for the lovely comments. They are very much appreciated! God Bless you all! :) (Joseph,Gerard and Sharon)

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/8/2009 6:51:00 AM

This is such a romantic piece. I like the flow of alliteration and the rhyming pattern. They certainly give the poem a special spark. Keep loving that man of yours. Great job! ~Joseph

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 6/17/2009 3:06:00 PM

Those last two lines are a keeper. I wish that I had written them. They have power, both romantic and pornograghic, to be sure. A true climax, if you will... Thank you very much for your comments on my contest entry. I do appreciate them greastly. regards, GK

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/1/2009 7:05:00 AM

Janice, thank you so very much for your warm and thoughtful congrats. So appreciated. Love, Shar

Janice Scott

Date: 5/12/2009 8:15:00 AM

Thank you so much for the comment, the congrats and for luck in the finals, Carol. God bless, Love Janice

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/12/2009 6:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Janice Scott

Date: 5/4/2009 5:20:00 AM

hank you so much Raul! I appreciate it! :) Janice

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/3/2009 9:53:00 PM

Janice, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Janice Scott

Date: 3/30/2009 4:29:00 AM

My sincere thanks to the three of you, Tulisha, Lolita, and Sue. I appreciate the wonderful comments and the congrats on my featured poem. Janice.

Sue Mason

Date: 3/29/2009 12:42:00 PM

Love the "sweet incendiary" within this beautiful poem, Janice. It is surely a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/27/2009 11:45:00 PM

So passionate and well written. This is truly deserving of being featured this week. Your words flow from the depths of your soul and set the readers heart ablaze. Wonderful writing. Congratulatons. Smiles from Lolita

Tulisha Blackshear

Date: 3/27/2009 11:20:00 AM

I really like this. congrats on a well deserved feature. I like your expressionism. good job

Janice Scott

Date: 3/27/2009 3:29:00 AM

Adeleke, thanks so much for the praise you've given my poem. I appreciate your wonderful words and I'm happy that you like my poem. Bless you! Always, Janice.

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 3/27/2009 3:00:00 AM

great and glorious is thy pen. this piece is awesome. keep writing and congrats on a well deserved feature... love this, i will add it to my favourite. great you!... Adeleke

Janice Scott

Date: 3/26/2009 10:26:00 AM

Kirstie, Carol and Vince...I want to thank you all for gratulating me on being a featured member this week. I would also like to extend a "Congratulations" to each of our wonderful writers who are also featured this week. God bless us all! Love Janice.