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Liquid Fire

Sweet day, so cool, so calm, so bright My love I anticipate tonight with much delight Soft speech, smooth touch, the warmth of your body More radiant than summer’s sunbeams, are you to me Rouse my sacred womanhood with fire and flame Throughout the night whilst I scream your name My strong man, my loving man, my man whom I adore Fulfill my deepest desires - give me more, more, more….. Oh sweet incendiary show me thy art Upon this gracious body and inside my heart That thirsts of love with brim-filled bowels of fierce desire That by mornings light I’ll have drained every drop of your liquid fire!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/2/2018 10:48:00 PM
Janice let me know when you decide to post something! :D
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Date: 5/1/2018 5:30:00 PM
Oh my flipping goodness fire is right! Janice I don't even know how I found this but I'm so glad I did! AWESOMENESS!
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Date: 5/2/2018 7:56:00 PM
FJ thank you so much! It has been a long while since I've written anything. Your comment today has inspired me to get back to writing!
Date: 7/8/2009 1:15:00 PM
Thanks so much guys, for the lovely comments. They are very much appreciated! God Bless you all! :) (Joseph,Gerard and Sharon)
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Date: 7/8/2009 6:51:00 AM
This is such a romantic piece. I like the flow of alliteration and the rhyming pattern. They certainly give the poem a special spark. Keep loving that man of yours. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 6/17/2009 3:06:00 PM
Those last two lines are a keeper. I wish that I had written them. They have power, both romantic and pornograghic, to be sure. A true climax, if you will... Thank you very much for your comments on my contest entry. I do appreciate them greastly. regards, GK
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Date: 6/1/2009 7:05:00 AM
Janice, thank you so very much for your warm and thoughtful congrats. So appreciated. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/12/2009 8:15:00 AM
Thank you so much for the comment, the congrats and for luck in the finals, Carol. God bless, Love Janice
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Date: 5/12/2009 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2009 5:20:00 AM
hank you so much Raul! I appreciate it! :) Janice
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Date: 5/3/2009 9:53:00 PM
Janice, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 3/30/2009 4:29:00 AM
My sincere thanks to the three of you, Tulisha, Lolita, and Sue. I appreciate the wonderful comments and the congrats on my featured poem. Janice.
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Date: 3/29/2009 12:42:00 PM
Love the "sweet incendiary" within this beautiful poem, Janice. It is surely a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/27/2009 11:45:00 PM
So passionate and well written. This is truly deserving of being featured this week. Your words flow from the depths of your soul and set the readers heart ablaze. Wonderful writing. Congratulatons. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/27/2009 11:20:00 AM
I really like this. congrats on a well deserved feature. I like your expressionism. good job
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Date: 3/27/2009 3:29:00 AM
Adeleke, thanks so much for the praise you've given my poem. I appreciate your wonderful words and I'm happy that you like my poem. Bless you! Always, Janice.
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Date: 3/27/2009 3:00:00 AM
great and glorious is thy pen. this piece is awesome. keep writing and congrats on a well deserved feature... love this, i will add it to my favourite. great you!... Adeleke
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Date: 3/26/2009 10:26:00 AM
Kirstie, Carol and Vince...I want to thank you all for gratulating me on being a featured member this week. I would also like to extend a "Congratulations" to each of our wonderful writers who are also featured this week. God bless us all! Love Janice.
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Date: 3/26/2009 9:35:00 AM
Congrats Janice on "Liquid Fire" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:12:00 AM
Very intense! Congrats on the feature. Kirstie
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Date: 3/25/2009 3:05:00 AM
Hi Carrie! Thanks so much for the congrats! I really appreciate it. Love, Janice.
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Date: 3/23/2009 7:54:00 PM
Wow...this one was Hot!! :_) a fun poem to be featured this week! Congratulations....Janice!! love, Carrie
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Date: 3/23/2009 6:01:00 AM
Thank you so much for the "congrats" Sharon. I appreciate you taking the time to stop by and congratulate me on my poem. God bless! Always, Janice
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Date: 3/23/2009 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/23/2009 4:30:00 AM
Hey Chris, thanks for the congrats. I'll be talking with you soon...you know where. Janice
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