Liquid Fire

Sweet day, so cool, so calm, so bright
My love I anticipate tonight with much delight

Soft speech, smooth touch, the warmth of your body
More radiant than summer’s sunbeams, are you to me

Rouse my sacred womanhood with fire and flame
Throughout the night whilst I scream your name

My strong man, my loving man, my man whom I adore
Fulfill my deepest desires - give me more, more, more…..

Oh sweet incendiary show me thy art
Upon this gracious body and inside my heart

That thirsts of love with brim-filled bowels of fierce desire
That by mornings light I’ll have drained every drop of your liquid fire!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Thomas Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Janice let me know when you decide to post something! :D
Thomas Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 5:30 PM
Oh my flipping goodness fire is right! Janice I don't even know how I found this but I'm so glad I did! AWESOMENESS!
Scott Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 7:56 PM
FJ thank you so much! It has been a long while since I've written anything. Your comment today has inspired me to get back to writing!
Scott Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 1:15 PM
Thanks so much guys, for the lovely comments. They are very much appreciated! God Bless you all! :) (Joseph,Gerard and Sharon)
Spence Sr Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 6:51 AM
This is such a romantic piece. I like the flow of alliteration and the rhyming pattern. They certainly give the poem a special spark. Keep loving that man of yours. Great job! ~Joseph
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June 17, 2009 at 3:06 PM
Those last two lines are a keeper. I wish that I had written them. They have power, both romantic and pornograghic, to be sure. A true climax, if you will... Thank you very much for your comments on my contest entry. I do appreciate them greastly. regards, GK
Winter Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 7:05 AM
Janice, thank you so very much for your warm and thoughtful congrats. So appreciated. Love, Shar
Scott Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 8:15 AM
Thank you so much for the comment, the congrats and for luck in the finals, Carol. God bless, Love Janice
Brown Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Scott Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 5:20 AM
hank you so much Raul! I appreciate it! :) Janice
Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 9:53 PM
Janice, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Scott Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 4:29 AM
My sincere thanks to the three of you, Tulisha, Lolita, and Sue. I appreciate the wonderful comments and the congrats on my featured poem. Janice.
Mason Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 12:42 PM
Love the "sweet incendiary" within this beautiful poem, Janice. It is surely a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
Townsend Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 11:45 PM
So passionate and well written. This is truly deserving of being featured this week. Your words flow from the depths of your soul and set the readers heart ablaze. Wonderful writing. Congratulatons. Smiles from Lolita
Blackshear Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 11:20 AM
I really like this. congrats on a well deserved feature. I like your expressionism. good job
Scott Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 3:29 AM
Adeleke, thanks so much for the praise you've given my poem. I appreciate your wonderful words and I'm happy that you like my poem. Bless you! Always, Janice.
Adeite Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 3:00 AM
great and glorious is thy pen. this piece is awesome. keep writing and congrats on a well deserved feature... love this, i will add it to my favourite. great you!... Adeleke
Scott Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 10:26 AM
Kirstie, Carol and Vince...I want to thank you all for gratulating me on being a featured member this week. I would also like to extend a "Congratulations" to each of our wonderful writers who are also featured this week. God bless us all! Love Janice.
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March 26, 2009 at 9:35 AM
Congrats Janice on "Liquid Fire" being featured. Vince
Brown Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 10:38 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Fontes Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 10:12 AM
Very intense! Congrats on the feature. Kirstie
Scott Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 3:05 AM
Hi Carrie! Thanks so much for the congrats! I really appreciate it. Love, Janice.
Richards Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 7:54 PM
Wow...this one was Hot!! :_) a fun poem to be featured this week! Congratulations....Janice!! love, Carrie
Scott Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 6:01 AM
Thank you so much for the "congrats" Sharon. I appreciate you taking the time to stop by and congratulate me on my poem. God bless! Always, Janice
Winter Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
Scott Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 4:30 AM
Hey Chris, thanks for the congrats. I'll be talking with you soon...you know where. Janice
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