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Liquid Death

Devastated wings,
Searching for cobalt waters:
Tortured by the sun.

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John Freeman

May 16, 2010 at 1:41 PM

Liquid death is indeed a good discription of it,Raul. Awesome job with this Haiku. Also, I wanted to thank your personally for placing my Haiku in your previous contest. Awesome job with all the contest you do with sponsoring. Agape, Moses

Abe Lopez

May 15, 2010 at 11:34 PM

a well written piece ................ raul , you continue to inspire us all!!!!

Charmaine Chircop

May 15, 2010 at 5:05 AM

love your work Raul,excellent indeed. .Charma

May 14, 2010 at 12:54 PM

Wow! I think would have placed high in your recent contest if someone else was judging. Such impact for three lines. Well done! Keep that creative pen flowing. Soup Mail! Karen

Edward Orozco

May 14, 2010 at 10:07 AM

beautiful piece

Jimmy Anderson

May 14, 2010 at 8:04 AM

Very nice Haiku, Raul...thnx for the cool contests you set up, Bro..... later, Jimmy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 14, 2010 at 4:51 AM

Again a perfect scenario in words of your tragic photo which moved all the poets for the contest yesterday .. very touching and tragic too.. appreciate the 12th place Raul.. 12 is my lucky number along with 5 and 3 .. so u have hit them all in your contests and I say thankxxx so very much for enjoying and counting my poetry as part of your winners circle today... luv.. from the "Sweetheart" Linda-Marie..