Lions Gate Bridge

on the pinnacle 
he resists temptation 
traffic resumes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 8:23 AM
Wow! The world doesn't see him. Somehow he comes to his senses. I can picture this. Well done! Life and death hang in the balance and some survive.
Kriticos Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 11:22 AM
Wow! I'm not sure I'll ever master the subtleties of this form of poetry. I did a double take!
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