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Lion's D-E-N

Always stay prayerful-
                                       for the lions are waiting 
                                              to devour you.




Pace, G
05-16-2012

INK-U-SCRIPT

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Funom Makama

March 25, 2014 at 4:21 PM

God bless you abundantly PACE! Thanks for the reminder and caution once again and we will definitely keep watch!

Linda Jackson

October 5, 2013 at 6:41 AM

I really like this haiku. The last line sums up life. Best wishes Linda x

Anne Rutherford

June 29, 2013 at 12:30 PM

A mouth full of inspiration , Love every line. well done Anne

Raul Moreno

March 9, 2013 at 10:05 PM

Nice message.

Ale A A

February 28, 2013 at 6:42 AM

Enough Said. Beautifully worded.

Poet Destroyer A

February 14, 2013 at 8:49 PM

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Poet Destroyer A

February 14, 2013 at 8:47 PM

Ink , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .

Justin Bordner

October 30, 2012 at 1:08 PM

I am the Red Lion - I pray to thank, and for the sour love of humiliation - lions' paws and death shawls are but romance in the glory of fight - J.A.B. %

Matthew Anish

October 4, 2012 at 12:43 PM

Let's hope they are dandi - lions insted of the real beast. Nice . powerful haiku here. Hope you enjoy your green tea. Peace & bleesings Matthew Anish

Chipepo Lwele

September 5, 2012 at 3:00 PM

Ink-u-script,mavellous and wonderful inspiration.

Keisha Davis

August 12, 2012 at 9:01 PM

powerful..though they were sent to the den, they need who their God was..amen!

Doreen Wright

July 1, 2012 at 2:33 PM

OH LAWD...KEEP THEM AWAY FROM ME PLEASE LOL!!! This is a heavy 3 liner. I enjoyed it! I Love the truth in your poetry and the little reminders that there is someone BIGGER than all of us in CHARGE! BE blessed Ink and watch out for those lions yourself :-)

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

June 20, 2012 at 1:12 PM

SOUP MAIL!!!

Debbie Duncan

June 18, 2012 at 8:20 AM

Oh I love Haiku' s ,,,,, keep writing Pace,,,,, have a blessed day as well ;}

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 18, 2012 at 8:25 AM

Thank you for sharing with me Debbie!!

Blake Hannah

June 5, 2012 at 12:48 PM

nice :3

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 5, 2012 at 1:27 PM

Thanks Blake for stopping by!! I appreciate it!!

Sean L Sanders

June 2, 2012 at 11:03 AM

Okay poet!!!! I feel their teeth

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 2, 2012 at 12:27 PM

Lol..thanks Sean!!

Carma Sanderson

June 1, 2012 at 11:20 PM

This is so00 true! as the devil devours me. lol.... carma

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 2, 2012 at 12:22 AM

Lol..too funny!!

Anne Rutherford

May 23, 2012 at 8:21 PM

This is more the just a poem !!!! This is truth itself.Wonderful words ,makes one think. Anne.

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 1, 2012 at 11:16 AM

Thank you so kindly Anne!!

Peggy Caulfield

May 23, 2012 at 1:51 PM

That's right brother - Dare to be a Daniel - Morning , noon and night. Thanks for your comments on my poems.

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 23, 2012 at 2:19 PM

No thank you!! hugs

Joseph May

May 20, 2012 at 6:40 AM

thanks for stopping by G..always appreciated ...Joseph

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 20, 2012 at 6:43 AM

Anytime dear poet friend!!

Gwendolen Song

May 19, 2012 at 3:57 PM

Great truths in your haiku, G. I don't make very good cat food either! Thanks for enjoying my grotesque poem...you need to give it a try and let me know what u come up with....come on...join the poooop party! hahahah. Gwenodlen

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 19, 2012 at 4:18 PM

Thank you so much..and I'll see what i can do.