Lion

Living in a pride he
 Lazes around while the
 Lionesses hunt for
 Large prey such as giraffes
 Looks like their prey is down!
 Leo gets the most meat
 Loud is his mighty roar
 
 4/14/17

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Heidi Sands

July 13, 2017 at 6:08 AM

I enjoyed this one. I like Lions. I have a photo of one for screen saver on tablet :) I see this one won a contest. Congratulations :)

Mark Martin

April 27, 2017 at 2:55 PM

Sounds like a great system - at least for the lion! Congratulations on your win Joseph! :-)

Eve Roper

April 22, 2017 at 7:31 PM

Nicely written , Joseph, congratulations on your win. ~*

Kim Merryman

April 18, 2017 at 10:22 PM

Joseph, great depiction of a lion's life. Wonderful smooth flowing lines as well. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Joseph May

April 19, 2017 at 6:10 AM

Thank you for my placement Kim..

Paul Callus

April 18, 2017 at 8:08 AM

Looks like animals have no problems with gender equality or the lack of it:) Congratulations on yet another fine win, Joseph! Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe

April 18, 2017 at 7:14 AM

Congrats on your win, Joseph.

Kim Rodrigues

April 18, 2017 at 5:34 AM

Congrats, Joseph!

John Michaels

April 18, 2017 at 2:04 AM

Just swinging back 'round again to congratulate you on your high-placed win! Regards, John.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 18, 2017 at 1:48 AM

- Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 16, 2017 at 6:20 AM

- An awesome pleiades poem, Joseph - Good luck in the contest, hoping you will win - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

April 16, 2017 at 1:44 AM

Excellent descriptive Pleiades. Well penned. All the best for the contest. Thanks for sharing it

Alexis Y.

April 15, 2017 at 11:11 AM

Hi Joseph, I loved your descriptions of a lion. Your last lines summed up the well written pleiade very well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis