Lion

Living in a pride he Lazes around while the Lionesses hunt for Large prey such as giraffes Looks like their prey is down! Leo gets the most meat Loud is his mighty roar 4/14/17

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Heidi Sands

Date: 7/13/2017 6:08:00 AM

I enjoyed this one. I like Lions. I have a photo of one for screen saver on tablet :) I see this one won a contest. Congratulations :)

Mark Martin

Date: 4/27/2017 2:55:00 PM

Sounds like a great system - at least for the lion! Congratulations on your win Joseph! :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2017 7:31:00 PM

Nicely written , Joseph, congratulations on your win. ~*

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/18/2017 10:22:00 PM

Joseph, great depiction of a lion's life. Wonderful smooth flowing lines as well. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Joseph May
Date: 4/19/2017 6:10:00 AM

Thank you for my placement Kim..

Paul Callus

Date: 4/18/2017 8:08:00 AM

Looks like animals have no problems with gender equality or the lack of it:) Congratulations on yet another fine win, Joseph! Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/18/2017 7:14:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Joseph.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/18/2017 5:34:00 AM

Congrats, Joseph!

John Michaels

Date: 4/18/2017 2:04:00 AM

Just swinging back 'round again to congratulate you on your high-placed win! Regards, John.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2017 1:48:00 AM

- Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/16/2017 6:20:00 AM

- An awesome pleiades poem, Joseph - Good luck in the contest, hoping you will win - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/16/2017 1:44:00 AM

Excellent descriptive Pleiades. Well penned. All the best for the contest. Thanks for sharing it

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/15/2017 11:11:00 AM

Hi Joseph, I loved your descriptions of a lion. Your last lines summed up the well written pleiade very well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/15/2017 9:50:00 AM

Aha! I chose 'lamb', you've done this well, Joseph:) a 7:)

John Michaels

Date: 4/15/2017 4:54:00 AM

This is great! Has a playful edge to it - "Leo gets the most meat" - which I really enjoyed. Good luck with the contest! Regards, John!

Chuck Melugin

Date: 4/15/2017 2:59:00 AM

Joseph, Thanks for the admission to your poetic safari. I observed in awe. My best to you, chuck

Jan Allison

Date: 4/14/2017 2:34:00 PM

Excellent descriptive pleaides Jospeh:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx