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Lion

Lives in and rules the jungle
In it is strength, speed but a small waist
Only fresh flesh is its delicacy
Nature's deep, sinking into its fearsome voice.

Copyright © Funom Makama | Year Posted 2016

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May 6, 2016 at 10:52 AM

Beautiful acrostic of the King of jungle LION. 7 sure my lovely friend, bl

Andrea Dietrich

April 21, 2016 at 11:49 PM

I really like what you did with LION!! The last two lines are my favorites.

April 22, 2016 at 9:04 AM

Thank you so much Andrea

April 20, 2016 at 2:35 AM

Wonderful Acrostic my friend... Cheers !!!! You described the Lion in a briliant way

April 20, 2016 at 12:48 PM

Thank you so much Red Fiery

March 27, 2016 at 5:14 PM

What a wonderful way to describe the "King of the Jungle", Funom. Nicely done!

April 1, 2016 at 10:09 AM

Thank you very much Dan Cwiak

March 19, 2016 at 12:34 AM

Hello Funom ... nice description Funom using the letters to begin each line - Lindsay

March 21, 2016 at 11:38 AM

Thank you very much Lindsay

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 18, 2016 at 12:32 PM

- Great about the lion, Funom ! - ......... my zodiac is the lion :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

March 21, 2016 at 11:37 AM

Thank you very much Anne Lise Andresen

March 18, 2016 at 11:36 AM

Oh to have a small waist....I would write a poem about this lioness. Fearsome write.

March 21, 2016 at 11:37 AM

hahahahahahaha.... Thank you very much Murray

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