Lining of Love

mother’s golden touch lining of love on rain cloud… wings turn nest in storm
January 4, 2020 Syllable count : 5/7/5 Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : Senryu On Mother Sponsor : Jenish Somadas
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Neumann Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 6:59 AM
Wonderful sentiments and so well expressed. Kind wishes, Kai
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 3:11 PM
Big congrats on the top win, Subimal.
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 7:28 PM
Congrats! Well written!
Roper Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 6:38 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Hawkens Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 6:28 PM
Wonderful Senryu. Congrats on your win. JC
Dutta Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 11:35 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP.
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 2:49 AM
what a lovely senryu :-) many congrats on your win Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
Somadas Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 11:57 PM
Congrats on your win.. The subtle pace in which the imagery reveals mesmerize my mind..
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