Lingering

Hurt
Judgment
Not knowing
The full story
Treated unfairly
Without reason
Lingering
Around
Still

Heidi Sands

9/2/17

betrayaljudgementpainninette

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

September 4, 2017 at 1:33 PM

Truth shot straight to the heart, Heidi. Your poetic dexterity on the various forms is really amazing. This sums up your point of view (POV) very well. Mighty fine poetry. Love and joy always.

Heidi Sands

September 4, 2017 at 2:08 PM

Thank you for your support Freddie. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day today. :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

September 3, 2017 at 5:44 AM

Brief but precisely meaningful.Every word counts to build up an image of a definitive state of mind.Enjoyed it Heidi. Love.

Heidi Sands

September 3, 2017 at 8:07 AM

Thank you very much Rajat :)

Russell Sivey

September 3, 2017 at 4:56 AM

This is a wonderful write about your current situation Heidi! I know that you are struggling with being treated unfairly, and that you aren't getting the fair shake! I'm sorry about your situation my friend! If there is any thing I can do to help just let me know! What a fabulous poem you have written here my friend! You have surely delighted me by your incredible skill with this ninette, a fun form to do, but not necessarily an easy one! Great Work!!

Heidi Sands

September 3, 2017 at 8:07 AM

Hi Russell. I don't feel like getting into what it was, but I do appreciate your offer to help. You are very kind. Thank you for the positive comment on this poem. I think this form can be fun :) I hope your day goes well today. :)

Susan Ashley

September 2, 2017 at 8:40 PM

Heidi, this poem is awesome and in the moment yet there feels like there is a backstory too. I think your poem is intriguing and evocative and very well done :)

Heidi Sands

September 3, 2017 at 8:05 AM

Hi Susan. Thank you so much for your comment :)