Lingering

Hurt Judgment Not knowing The full story Treated unfairly Without reason Lingering Around Still Heidi Sands 9/2/17

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 9/4/2017 1:33:00 PM

Truth shot straight to the heart, Heidi. Your poetic dexterity on the various forms is really amazing. This sums up your point of view (POV) very well. Mighty fine poetry. Love and joy always.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/4/2017 2:08:00 PM

Thank you for your support Freddie. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day today. :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 9/3/2017 5:44:00 AM

Brief but precisely meaningful.Every word counts to build up an image of a definitive state of mind.Enjoyed it Heidi. Love.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/3/2017 8:07:00 AM

Thank you very much Rajat :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/3/2017 4:56:00 AM

This is a wonderful write about your current situation Heidi! I know that you are struggling with being treated unfairly, and that you aren't getting the fair shake! I'm sorry about your situation my friend! If there is any thing I can do to help just let me know! What a fabulous poem you have written here my friend! You have surely delighted me by your incredible skill with this ninette, a fun form to do, but not necessarily an easy one! Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/3/2017 8:07:00 AM

Hi Russell. I don't feel like getting into what it was, but I do appreciate your offer to help. You are very kind. Thank you for the positive comment on this poem. I think this form can be fun :) I hope your day goes well today. :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/2/2017 8:40:00 PM

Heidi, this poem is awesome and in the moment yet there feels like there is a backstory too. I think your poem is intriguing and evocative and very well done :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/3/2017 8:05:00 AM

Hi Susan. Thank you so much for your comment :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/2/2017 5:12:00 PM

what a solid poem written finely in just few words, heidi... beautiful!... huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/2/2017 5:20:00 PM

Thanks so much Nette. I appreciate your comment :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/2/2017 5:02:00 PM

Very creative depiction of moments in time as you feel, Heidi--the reader feels as well!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/2/2017 5:20:00 PM

Thanks for the positive feedback Vijay. I appreciate it ! :)