Lines and Wrinkles

I wish that I could just erase
The lines and wrinkles on my face
And also all that sagging skin
That proves which decade I am in.

When women crow, so smug with pride,
About their age, which they won’t hide,
I think, “Yeah, right! I’m really sold
On how much you like looking old!”

I won’t get face-lift surgery
And it would not be perjury
To say that Botox ain’t my thing,
Despite the smoothness it would bring.

So I will bear my aging mien,
Accepting that the senior scene
Is where, at my age, I must be,
But I’d prefer it mirror-free!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 6:31 PM
There you go, Ilene: Mirror free! the perfect solution! Bravo, Inventor! ~ gw
Callus Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 4:52 PM
After reading this I have added on extra lines and wrinkles, Ilene....from the big smile you elicited by this delightful poem. As for mirrors...they show but don't tell:) Regards // paul
Adams Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 3:42 PM
I'm right with you here Ilene. Plastic surgery for the most part doesn't look very good. With the money I have I'd probably end of looking like the elephant man! Another very enjoyable poem, well written and rhymed!
Bauer Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 7:38 PM
hey pat! thanks for reading and for your delightful comment...
Man Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 10:44 PM
Your daily words and wit are such an enjoyable treasure!
Bauer Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 7:37 PM
thank you so much for that, chance! much appreciated!
Onclaud Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 2:09 PM
I've seen horror picture of women who went under the knife to look prettier, but, but, they came out like clowns... good stuff; you are lovely the way you are!...huggs
Bauer Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 7:37 PM
thank you, nette, for that lovely comment! i've also seen those pictures and it's pretty awful when someone's face comes out looking so stiff and distorted after surgery...
Torrente Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 4:44 AM
Fascinating poem though not to worry much. Men are just as vain! Shall we just grin and bear it?
Bauer Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 7:35 PM
glad to hear that men go through the same thing, juaneco! often, though, older men somehow look "distinguished" as opposed to old. i guess we all have no choice but to "just grin and bear it," as you say. thanks for writing...
Andresen Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 4:37 AM
- All grandmothers should have "Lines and Wrinkles" dear Ilene - ... life lines - Lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bauer Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 7:32 PM
yes, anne-lise! i think we've earned them! thank you for the comment...
Cunningham Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 10:19 PM
Maybe Ilene, but the real beauty is under the skin. A price we all pay for wisdom.
Bauer Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 7:30 PM
a pretty steep price, though, tom! thanks for reading...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 8:10 PM
Giggles ;) with ya there. xomo
Bauer Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 7:29 PM
i guess many of us can relate. thanks for the comment, maureen...
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 6:27 PM
I would get plastic surgery one day IF I ever get the money. It is just the practical thing to do these days, but of course, who can pay for it. That is the problem. Loved this.
Bauer Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 7:28 PM
to me, it's a combination of fear and also not wanting to look like some of the disastrous outcomes i've seen. i'll stick with a little hair color and living with the wrinkles and sagging skin. thanks for reading...
Allison Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 4:55 PM
I'd just get rid of the mirror Ilene:-) you are beautiful on the outside and inside:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 7:24 PM
awwwww! thank you, jan, for your unwavering support in all ways!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 3:34 PM
The effects if aging right before our aye-yi-eyes!!
Bauer Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 7:22 PM
ha! very funny comment, kim! thank you for it...
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