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Line Upon Line

Line Upon Line

Truths applied each day,
Teach the heart obedience.
Everlastingly


Inspired by Raul Moreno’s contest

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
March 3, 2010
Poetic form: Senryu 5-7-5-format

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Ernilando Tugaff Date: 3/17/2010 9:34:00 AM Well said in just few words. Good luck in your field of endeavor. Love and prayers. Ernilando Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/16/2010 4:53:00 AM Congratulations on your win Dane Ann in Raul's contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Noel Villarosa Date: 3/14/2010 4:02:00 AM This is the foundation of great love story, honesty and understanding. Congratulations Dane Ann. (^_^) Noel. Login to Reply

Date: 3/13/2010 7:40:00 PM What an uplifting view in this poem. I liked it the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep up the good writing. Karen Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/13/2010 6:13:00 PM Great message in yours, Dane Ann . A big congrats to you. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 3/13/2010 5:39:00 PM Congratulations on your success Dane. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/13/2010 3:22:00 PM Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem and placement in Raul's recent contest.. a wonderful win for u to so enjoy and another trip to the winners circle so well deserved..luv.. Linda-Marie.. Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 3/13/2010 2:58:00 PM DASJ, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul Login to Reply

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo Date: 3/6/2010 11:57:00 PM really warm write and just a great feeling comes from reading this write as always your work is always a plessure to read Login to Reply

Susan Palli Date: 3/6/2010 11:58:00 AM Well done! so true. Susan Login to Reply

Christopher Flaherty Date: 3/5/2010 2:06:00 PM Good Evening Dane Ann, I wish i could honestly admit that i apply truth and obedience in my own life but sadly i dont, I think i write to appease the fact theat i am part of thr problem. After i read your comments i re-read my words and you put better into words what i was trying to express than myself. I am so thankfull you took the time to read my write because i didnt realise what it meant until i read your commets . Thankyou very much , Love Chris Login to Reply

Anna-Marie Docherty Date: 3/5/2010 12:17:00 PM Well said in few words too! Well done Dane Ann! Hugs, Anna-Marie. Login to Reply

Date: 3/4/2010 5:09:00 PM What an uplifting view. You have me smiling. I like the title. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for reading and for your kind comments on my short story. Blessings to you. Karen Login to Reply

Joanna Smith Date: 3/4/2010 2:45:00 PM wow that is very good as usual very good piece of knolege in this poem for me to ponder as well.Jo Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 3/4/2010 7:51:00 AM Nicely done, Dane Ann. Good luck in Raul's contest! ~ Carrie Login to Reply

Margaret Foster Date: 3/3/2010 10:11:00 PM Wise words in this short form Dane Ann, Looks good to me...cheers Margaret Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/3/2010 7:40:00 PM A wonderful Haiku Dane Ann and such beautiful imagery in these lines... good luck in Raul's newest contest.. ..the photo was absolutely beautiful to write from..my entry is Hallowed Heart...luv.. blessings.. Linda-Marie Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/3/2010 6:53:00 PM Great write that should be in the winner's circle..Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara Login to Reply