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Line Upon Line

Line Upon Line

Truths applied each day,
Teach the heart obedience.
Everlastingly


Inspired by Raul Moreno’s contest

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
March 3, 2010
Poetic form: Senryu 5-7-5-format

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Ernilando Tugaff

March 17, 2010 at 9:34 AM

Well said in just few words. Good luck in your field of endeavor. Love and prayers. Ernilando

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 16, 2010 at 4:53 AM

Congratulations on your win Dane Ann in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

Noel Villarosa

March 14, 2010 at 4:02 AM

This is the foundation of great love story, honesty and understanding. Congratulations Dane Ann. (^_^) Noel.

March 13, 2010 at 7:40 PM

What an uplifting view in this poem. I liked it the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

March 13, 2010 at 6:13 PM

Great message in yours, Dane Ann . A big congrats to you. LUv, Andrea

John Freeman

March 13, 2010 at 5:39 PM

Congratulations on your success Dane. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 13, 2010 at 3:22 PM

Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem and placement in Raul's recent contest.. a wonderful win for u to so enjoy and another trip to the winners circle so well deserved..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Raul Moreno

March 13, 2010 at 2:58 PM

DASJ, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

March 6, 2010 at 11:57 PM

really warm write and just a great feeling comes from reading this write as always your work is always a plessure to read

Susan Palli

March 6, 2010 at 11:58 AM

Well done! so true. Susan

Christopher Flaherty

March 5, 2010 at 2:06 PM

Good Evening Dane Ann, I wish i could honestly admit that i apply truth and obedience in my own life but sadly i dont, I think i write to appease the fact theat i am part of thr problem. After i read your comments i re-read my words and you put better into words what i was trying to express than myself. I am so thankfull you took the time to read my write because i didnt realise what it meant until i read your commets . Thankyou very much , Love Chris

Anna-Marie Docherty

March 5, 2010 at 12:17 PM

Well said in few words too! Well done Dane Ann! Hugs, Anna-Marie.

March 4, 2010 at 5:09 PM

What an uplifting view. You have me smiling. I like the title. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for reading and for your kind comments on my short story. Blessings to you. Karen

Joanna Smith

March 4, 2010 at 2:45 PM

wow that is very good as usual very good piece of knolege in this poem for me to ponder as well.Jo

Carrie Richards

March 4, 2010 at 7:51 AM

Nicely done, Dane Ann. Good luck in Raul's contest! ~ Carrie

Margaret Foster

March 3, 2010 at 10:11 PM

Wise words in this short form Dane Ann, Looks good to me...cheers Margaret

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 3, 2010 at 7:40 PM

A wonderful Haiku Dane Ann and such beautiful imagery in these lines... good luck in Raul's newest contest.. ..the photo was absolutely beautiful to write from..my entry is Hallowed Heart...luv.. blessings.. Linda-Marie