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Our calendar marks but a line of days to set with weeks and months to fill the passage of time in most tidy ways. Many might favour the month of May when blossoms sweet the nose will thrill our calendar marks but a line of days Then there’s October, with leaves all ablaze harvest’s rich bounty and meat on the grill signing time’s passage in succulent ways. Some swoon for June and wedding bouquets and midsummer’s night on a dark forest hill with calendar midstream in year’s line of days But I choose December though skies are grey when Yuletide’s warmth cuts through winter’s chill and scripts yearend’s passage in most tidy ways. Once round the circle, ahead new days lay as together we travel on time’s treadmill our calendar tracks passage in most tidy ways till our time is over and so end our days.
7/7/2020

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Date: 9/23/2020 6:21:00 AM
Creative work. The Villanelle is not a very easy form to do. I can't ever remember exactly the way it should be written and have to look up a form every time. LOL..I think you have done well. Sara
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Date: 9/23/2020 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Sara, Itoo have to look u this form and sometimes stray.

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