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Poetic Form: Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 April 26

*2nd Place*
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Contest Judged: 2024 May 04
Sponsored by: Joseph May

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When dawn drifts into enchanted meadows I flow in the dreams to where the sun glows prepares for lark sounds tethered to thistles sprout winged feathers distinguished initials daybreak cast expressed suppressions idles a desired forenoon plaything thumbs fiddles precedence ground noteworthy work matter gleaning harvest spread the light of laughter pigment spectrum goldenrod noon stretcher spruced grasslands lemony sliding fetch her droopy starlight strands dusk ruddy runner sweetly evening brushed purplish lavender midnight maiden bid moonwalkers strangely twilight tone-down twinkle moon pies lightly #5

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Joseph May

Date: 5/5/2024 6:54:00 AM

Congrats on your win Hilo, Very nicely done

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/5/2024 7:02:00 AM

Thanks, Joseph, hard to fit "24 little hours", Aloha, William

Jay Narain

Date: 5/4/2024 10:10:00 AM

Nice poem on dawn. Congrats on win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/4/2024 12:19:00 PM

Thanks, Jay. Aloha, William

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/27/2024 1:16:00 PM

a beautifully descriptive poem, William. I loved the fluidity of your poem and your rhyme scheme. I believe this poem is a great contest contender. Best wishes in the competition. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/27/2024 4:15:00 PM

Great hopes assured, thanks Sara, bit busy--thanks to Silent One refer to my recently closed contest, my friend. Aloha William

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/27/2024 5:12:00 AM

Enchanting descriptions of dawn, William. Much enjoyed the beauty of your poem, my friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/27/2024 7:49:00 AM

Thanks, Vijay, I appreciate your visiting share. Aloha, William