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Poetic Form: Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 April 26

 

*2nd Place*
Line Inspiration
Contest Judged: 2024 May 04
Sponsored by: Joseph May

 

Image: Sun & Moon by popsugar.com

When dawn drifts into enchanted meadows
         I flow in the dreams to where the sun glows
prepares for lark sounds tethered to thistles
         sprout winged feathers distinguished initials
daybreak cast expressed suppressions idles
         a desired forenoon plaything thumbs fiddles

precedence ground noteworthy work matter
         gleaning harvest spread the light of laughter

pigment spectrum goldenrod noon stretcher
         spruced grasslands lemony sliding fetch her
droopy starlight strands dusk ruddy runner
         sweetly evening brushed purplish lavender

midnight maiden bid moonwalkers strangely
         twilight tone-down twinkle moon pies lightly

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Joseph May Date: 5/5/2024 6:54:00 AM Congrats on your win Hilo, Very nicely done Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 5/5/2024 7:02:00 AM Thanks, Joseph, hard to fit "24 little hours", Aloha, William

Jay Narain Date: 5/4/2024 10:10:00 AM Nice poem on dawn. Congrats on win. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 5/4/2024 12:19:00 PM Thanks, Jay. Aloha, William

Vijay Pandit Date: 4/27/2024 5:12:00 AM Enchanting descriptions of dawn, William. Much enjoyed the beauty of your poem, my friend. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 4/27/2024 7:49:00 AM Thanks, Vijay, I appreciate your visiting share. Aloha, William