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Poetic Form: Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 April 26

 

*2nd Place*
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Contest Judged: 2024 May 04
Sponsored by: Joseph May

 

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When dawn drifts into enchanted meadows
         I flow in the dreams to where the sun glows
prepares for lark sounds tethered to thistles
         sprout winged feathers distinguished initials
daybreak cast expressed suppressions idles
         a desired forenoon plaything thumbs fiddles

precedence ground noteworthy work matter gleaning harvest spread the light of laughter
pigment spectrum goldenrod noon stretcher spruced grasslands lemony sliding fetch her droopy starlight strands dusk ruddy runner sweetly evening brushed purplish lavender
midnight maiden bid moonwalkers strangely twilight tone-down twinkle moon pies lightly #5
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May Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 6:54 AM
Congrats on your win Hilo, Very nicely done
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 7:02 AM
Thanks, Joseph, hard to fit "24 little hours", Aloha, William
Narain Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Nice poem on dawn. Congrats on win.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 4, 2024 at 12:19 PM
Thanks, Jay. Aloha, William
Pandit Avatar
April 27, 2024 at 5:12 AM
Enchanting descriptions of dawn, William. Much enjoyed the beauty of your poem, my friend.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 27, 2024 at 7:49 AM
Thanks, Vijay, I appreciate your visiting share. Aloha, William
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