Linda's Empty Shell

Linda-Marie… Know about the empty shell, lonesome is the place i dwell, just on the blue side Elvis said, need some moonshine fore me bed, but then, i do a bit of rhyming:) Karma Nancy J perhaps my sins are listed, so when me feet get blistered, a karmic demister...to do read my "thinly wangmoo ?" on ya mate... Robert H heheheh....women who care with jealous stare, aint that rare, i've met some..... Yes Robert, Murder bloody murder, where you get blown right to hell, death waits on every corner, not a lovely place to dwell:( Afghanistan... Don Johnson
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Kendrick Avatar
October 29, 2011 at 5:21 AM
Interesting work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by...Your comment was uplifting..Sara
Sivey Avatar
October 27, 2011 at 9:24 PM
You sure can write an interesting poem Don! All of the situations are so very unique!! I love the line, "...need some moonshine for me bed," ah man, dude, that just flows off my tongue, totally awesome!! Lovely work!!
Lane Avatar
October 27, 2011 at 5:13 PM
Man, you are good. Let it flow my friend. Tony
Johnson Avatar
October 27, 2011 at 6:18 PM
If i was good as you Tony, me feet wouldn't even smell, tiptoeing with the tulips, change me name to "no more smell" hehe
Jones Avatar
October 27, 2011 at 5:04 PM
wangmoo is hands down the grooviest word i've encountered this week... is one a the reasons i read ya~N :)
Johnson Avatar
October 27, 2011 at 6:19 PM
The verse is about Tibetan karma .... thinly wangmoo....:)
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