Linda's Empty Shell

Linda-Marie… Know about the empty shell, lonesome is the place i dwell, just on the blue side Elvis said, need some moonshine fore me bed, but then, i do a bit of rhyming:) Karma Nancy J perhaps my sins are listed, so when me feet get blistered, a karmic demister...to do read my "thinly wangmoo ?" on ya mate... Robert H heheheh....women who care with jealous stare, aint that rare, i've met some..... Yes Robert, Murder bloody murder, where you get blown right to hell, death waits on every corner, not a lovely place to dwell:( Afghanistan... Don Johnson

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Date: 10/29/2011 5:21:00 AM
Interesting work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by...Your comment was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 10/27/2011 9:24:00 PM
You sure can write an interesting poem Don! All of the situations are so very unique!! I love the line, "...need some moonshine for me bed," ah man, dude, that just flows off my tongue, totally awesome!! Lovely work!!
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Date: 10/27/2011 5:13:00 PM
Man, you are good. Let it flow my friend. Tony
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Date: 10/27/2011 6:18:00 PM
If i was good as you Tony, me feet wouldn't even smell, tiptoeing with the tulips, change me name to "no more smell" hehe
Date: 10/27/2011 5:04:00 PM
wangmoo is hands down the grooviest word i've encountered this week... is one a the reasons i read ya~N :)
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Date: 10/27/2011 6:19:00 PM
The verse is about Tibetan karma .... thinly wangmoo....:)
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