Linda-Marie's Lovely Lyrics ( Excerpt)

This is just an excerpt; the full poem is meant for the one I wrote it for


I have been to many gardens… looking for flawless flowers
Not knowing that there is someone more romantic than roses
I have searched the skies if I could find a sweet, shining star
Not knowing that there is someone more glorious than the galaxies

I love Linda’s rhymes and rhapsodies; they are as real as the rainbow
Her pens, pad and poems are pillars… so passionate and powerful
Her scripts are saintly spirits that sing sweet songs like the sparrows;
Words are not wide enough to woo a woman so wise and wonderful!
                               Dedicated to Linda-Marie Bariana 
© Adeleke Adeite
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 12:15 PM
What do u want to speak to me about ..I am having a problem getting onto F.B. with my cell phone.. can we speak via Soup Mail? soup mummy
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July 1, 2010 at 2:00 PM
Also a favorite today.. luv
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July 1, 2010 at 1:59 PM
The complete poem is excellent and exquisite Adeleke.. u have so honored me and I am speechless.. so appreciate your sentiments of me and will try to live up to each one ... the entire poem on my F.B. again will be framed and put on a wall in my home when I get back.. thankxxxx with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA.
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July 1, 2010 at 1:19 PM
Wow! a crush.
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July 1, 2010 at 12:22 PM
Hey dude, this is right on the money. I agree with you all the way. This prose piece flows very well. I like your use of alliteration to bring out the beauty of the words. It's like perfume oozing from a crack in the jar. Blessings, Joseph
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