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The older we are The more invisible by far We seem to the younger mind But soon they will see What's known by you and me We're only immortal for a limited time *** Poetry notes: 10/19/2019

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Date: 10/30/2019 5:40:00 AM
I remember back when I thought 35 was ancient. Now I am 65 years old and see that ANCIENT WAS 30 YEARS AGO... This gem in its brevity hits hard. A great creation my friend.. A fav too...
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Mark Toney
Date: 10/30/2019 8:02:00 AM
What a brilliant observation, Robert! I’ll be pondering over your comment throughout the day. I appreciate your insight and the fav. Cheers!
Date: 10/27/2019 1:00:00 PM
Powerfully penned and so true.
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Date: 10/27/2019 1:29:00 PM
Juliet, thank you for the encouragement and visit. ~Mark
Date: 10/19/2019 7:41:00 PM
So true. Lovely done! xomo
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Date: 10/19/2019 8:53:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment and visit, Maureen! ~Mark