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Limit To Freedom

There is limit to our freedom For the wealthy it’s all about wisdom For the singer in the star and stardom Even for the king in his kingdom You are free to speak… no slander You are free to mix … no occulting You are free to vote… no rigging You are free to live… no blunder You are free to take… no stealing You are free to walk… no roaming You are free to drive… no speeding You are free to fight… no killing We are free yet bound with a chain We can get the gain… also the pain We can join the train… and the strain There is freedom… in the tough terrain

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Date: 7/6/2010 1:33:00 PM

Interesting slant on the topic. Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/6/2010 6:54:00 AM

Congrats Adeleke on your HM in the freedom and liberty contest.. with this outstanding write.. enjoy your very special honor my dear one.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii AlohA..S.M.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 4:26:00 AM

Congratulations Adeleke on your win in Dane Ann's contest "Liberty and Freedom to Choose". Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/6/2010 3:59:00 AM

oh wow Adeleke (yay now I know how to pronounce your name!)-- I really like how you presented your points and contrasted them with these "limits"--very well done and thought provoking indeed-- and congrats for being in the winner's circle! --nikko :)