Limbo

from The John Poems I tumble from a dream into the nightmare of waking. I claw my way back toward sleep but can find no purchase. So just like that, you are gone, And my half-healed wounds bleed anew As reality steals you away and, with it my happiness and the wish that dreams were mine to choose.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 18, 2015 at 3:34 PM
Wow!! The ending of the poem can and is what dreams to which you can choose is and can be your happiest moments.... Thanks for sharing... hugs Theresa
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July 18, 2015 at 1:17 PM
The ending of this poem really stands out to me.....Great Job-Love Ettie
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July 18, 2015 at 1:46 PM
Thank you for your kind words.
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