-- Limbo --

LIMBO trapped between life’s choices it’s been that way too long frozen firmly in the middle a nowhere place so wrong the rollercoaster races it’s lows and highs ebb strong weighing up all outcomes consequences prolong promises lie unfulfilled of pasture greener to belong what pulls us so to live in ‘home of free and land of brave’ ? why resident ‘Green cards’ to us all with ease they gave? © Kim van Breda—May 2014 (Our family have been trying to relocate to the USA from SA for the last 5 years since receiving our Green Cards.. it has been a really difficult place to be... in between here and there. The job market is really difficult to crack.)
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May 10, 2014 at 8:25 AM
Beautiful write Kim....an emotional tug of war ....best wishes
Smith Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 12:58 PM
This wonderful Kim...Is there is anything I can do to help with your process? ...hugs Tim
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May 9, 2014 at 1:07 PM
Thanks Tim. I always maintain that if it is in God's life path for us, it will be in His timing.. His jurisdiction only. I will message your inbox.
Williams Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 12:16 PM
Hi Kim, I love your lines in this but the format is very clever as visually it looks like a set of haiku's, very good and hope the move turns out well for you...David
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