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Lily of the Valley

Lily of the Valley 

Wakeful Light of sunrise Monarch butterflies' swarm In a fluttering flight amid Green fields Nestling Lily of the valley Flowers sipping nectar- A sweetly scent Of spring 5/2/2020
1) 9 lines only. Any theme.. - 2 / 4 / 6 / 8 / 2 / 8 / 6 / 4 / 2
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Merryman Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 7:39 PM
Beautiful imagery, Eve! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Sambourne Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 9:55 AM
A memorable write to celebrate the intricacies of butterfly + flower. Congratulations! Brian
Alex Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 1:33 AM
Beautiful imagery. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 6:10 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem, Eve:-)
Krutsinger Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 6:52 AM
Nothing better than a cinquain with a monarch and lily of the valley! Well done Eve. Well done!
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 2:36 PM
very lovely, dear!
May Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 9:20 AM
Wonderful write Eve, best wishes
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 8:50 AM
This is lovely! My best to you in the contest. I just found my lily of the valley poking up, they have blessed me twice today, thank You! xomo
Allison Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 8:05 AM
absolutely delightful Eve, I have just finished my poem will post it later!:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 4:52 AM
How delightful this is, Eve! Not only a Butterfly Cinquain, but also a butterfly theme, gracing a most beautiful bell-shaped flower. ~ Wishing you lovely, blessed Sunday. Hugs // paul
Kauffman Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 11:18 PM
Lovely Eve. Lily of the Valley are one of my very favorite flowers. Good luck in the contest.
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