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Lily Bells

How rainbows covet lily bells
that chime the dulcet birth of May
with murmured notes in fay pastels.

How rainbows covet lily bells,
mellifluous in shaded dells, 
to mime in tranquil bloom manque.

How rainbows covet lily bells
that chime the dulcet birth of May.


5/3/18
Celebrate May with a Triolet
Andrea Dietrich
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Allison Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 2:06 AM
dropping back with my congrats Dale the pic you chose with your love of colour was so 'you' :-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 8:00 AM
Thanks, Jan!
Gauthier Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 2:25 PM
Lovely, Dale. Congrats on your win.
Cozart Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 2:29 PM
Thank you, Line.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:58 PM
I enjoyed this beauty!
Cozart Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 8:10 AM
Thanks, Kim.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:01 PM
This is exquisite Dale! I was not aware of the rainbow blooms, and I should be, being a Taurus. This gem is going into my Fave's. Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
Cozart Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:09 PM
Thanks very much, Connie.
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 5:52 PM
This is so flowing and lovely, Dale. Congrats in my contest. A soupmail for you.
Cozart Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 7:09 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Sergi Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 6:52 PM
A very flowing triolet, Dale
Gondolf Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 9:05 AM
I really enjoyed this wonderfully written triolet, Dale, best of luck in the contest. John
Cozart Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 9:55 AM
Thanks, John.
Ashley Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 10:40 PM
Your poem charms with its effortless elegance, Dale. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 8:25 AM
Thanks so much, Susan.
Brown Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 6:12 PM
Very well written poem! Love your muse and execution! Great write! XOXO - Briauna
Cozart Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 6:18 PM
Thanks for reading.
Ravidas Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 5:13 PM
Lovely triolet. To my point of view, triolet is the most beautiful genre among fixed forms. Good luck with the contest)
Cozart Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 5:17 PM
I appreciate it, Kurt.
Onclaud Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 3:25 PM
your eloquence shines through this enchanting piece, dale.. i like the impact of the 1st line...huggs
Cozart Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 4:52 PM
Thank you, Nette. I'm glad you liked it.
Allison Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 1:27 PM
absolutely stunning Dale and I love the image you chose. I hope Andrea loves this gem!:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 1:48 PM
Thanks very much, Jan.
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