Lily

Lily Slender, tender Smells sweet, swells pure, spells grace Lovely Lily of the valley Jesus 08.06.2021 Traditional cinquain

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Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/18/2021 1:11:00 AM

Awesome imagery... so well done dear Jo... Congrats on your win... Hugs... ~ Ani

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/16/2021 9:34:00 AM

Now I finally understand why this was my mother's favorite flower, and I thank you

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/8/2021 6:50:00 AM

I like this plant and we had some at one time but they disappeared from the scene. I need to get some more. Congrats on this winner. Sara

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/6/2021 10:35:00 AM

This is wonderful Jo! I love the personification of the lily of the valley as Jesus. I have always loved lily of the valley and know every time I see them bloom I will think of Jesus as "the lily of the valley" and your poem. Thank you for that gift. This is going into my favs! Blessings.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/6/2021 7:08:00 AM

Beautiful poem. It Shows Jesus is alive. He is, indeed. Congratulations on your win!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/6/2021 2:07:00 AM

Great tribute to our Lord. We have a round-a-bout full of these lilies of the Nile. Blessings.