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“The actual guise of her has become apparent” ~~ The Poet Engaged in rapturous slander. Forced by reputation to meander. Through the annals of time, Deemed worse than a witch sublime Indicted as a demon in old folk lore Seducing men asleep to wake no more. Maligned, falsely accused, my name abused Demons to keep them afraid and subdued We have, violent police and false news today Now the demons had no need to stay Pitted the mate of Samael, a demon Though never receiving his semen Deemed to be starved of love These accusations, could I rise above? No killer was I, at childbirth Twas unsanitary practices for what it’s worth. Although I was tagged a man hater My ill repute was changed much later Rebranded from a malevolent figure incorrect It was transformed to one of respect. Becoming a second wave feminist voice. A dramatic twist in narrative to rejoice. Now revered for all my positive traits as reliance. Independence, empowerment and defiance. Qualities that rendered me refusal to submit. Accepting this description I freely admit Recognized as a model to radiate assertion In all this time never contemplated desertion. Fortitude to grasp the bull’s horns Bravery to repel all man’s scorns Being the weaker gender is now just a myth Conviction and diligence I am always with. No bragging of honor, valor or victory is needed Any compassion I have is now frequently heeded I advance with the strength to stymie the foe. Estimate from where I come, but see where I go Being submissive with piety was never my station I stand a symbolist reflection of the feminist vocation No need for a masculine throng to be invited The powerful fire within me has been resighted I am, Lilith by name I feel no shame.

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Date: 6/14/2024 8:58:00 AM
Greatly enjoyed your dark tale. I enjoyed your portrayal of Lilith, a strong and powerful woman, cunning and confident, a lover and a fighter. The transformative twist was terrific!!! Such a well written and enjoyable read!! Congratulations on your finish!! Well done, your work Speaks Volumes!!
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Date: 6/17/2024 4:51:00 AM
. . . Thank you Edward. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/13/2024 9:37:00 AM
"I am, Lilith by name I feel no shame." - Beautifully written and ended. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/13/2024 9:51:00 AM
Your comment is sincerely appreciated Christuraj. Thank you.
Date: 6/12/2024 12:51:00 PM
I see you have opened your comments again.. I enjoyed the rhymes and flow to your poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 6/12/2024 9:28:00 PM
Ah dear S.O. you are getting more observant with age. :) Thank you for your placement. Your contests not only challenge, they educate. T'was an interesting topic. Many thanks , Wen

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