Sushma A. Singh Poet Verse

Lilies

Lazing in spring's warm bliss
               lure butterflies with scents
     Lustrous pearly dewdrops
                  leave velvety footprints
     Landscape spangled with stars
             Lissome leaves in white hues
     Lie on me when I die...


Contest Pleiades -L
Seven lines with six syllables each
Date April 14, 2017

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Mark Martin April 27, 2017 at 3:21 PM Great poetry about nature's wonder. Congratulations on your win Sushma! :-) Sushma A. Singh April 27, 2017 at 10:52 PM Thanks! Sushma A. Singh April 27, 2017 at 10:52 PM Thanks! Sushma A. Singh April 27, 2017 at 10:50 PM Thanks!

Eve Roper April 22, 2017 at 7:23 PM Nicely written , Sushma, congratulations on your win. ~* Sushma A. Singh April 27, 2017 at 10:50 PM Thanks!

Joanna Daniel April 20, 2017 at 10:27 AM Amazing beauty in your poem, Sushma:) many congratulations:) a 7:) Sushma A. Singh April 20, 2017 at 11:19 AM Thanks, Jo:) Sushma A. Singh April 20, 2017 at 11:18 AM Thanks, Jo:)

Kim Merryman April 18, 2017 at 9:44 PM Such beautiful imagery in this wonderfully descriptive write, Sushma! Great work! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim Sushma A. Singh April 18, 2017 at 10:45 PM Thank you, Kim! I really enjoy writing this form :)

John Michaels April 18, 2017 at 7:15 PM Great imagery and a powerful message. Congratulations on winning first place! Regards, John. Sushma A. Singh April 18, 2017 at 8:04 PM Thank you! Sushma A. Singh April 18, 2017 at 8:02 PM Thank you! Sushma A. Singh April 18, 2017 at 8:01 PM Thank you!

Charlie Smith April 18, 2017 at 3:59 PM Terrific work Sushma, congratulations... Sushma A. Singh April 18, 2017 at 8:04 PM Thanks! Sushma A. Singh April 18, 2017 at 8:03 PM Thanks!

Sara Chansarkar April 18, 2017 at 3:17 PM Lovely lilies Sushma,congrats! Sushma A. Singh April 18, 2017 at 8:03 PM Thanks, Sara!

Kim Rodrigues April 18, 2017 at 5:25 AM Wow! Lovely! Congrats, Sushma! Sushma A. Singh April 18, 2017 at 6:18 AM Thanks , Kim!

Roy Pett April 18, 2017 at 5:06 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Sushma, great theme. :) Sushma A. Singh April 18, 2017 at 6:20 AM Thanks!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 18, 2017 at 1:51 AM - Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, Sushma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sushma A. Singh April 18, 2017 at 6:18 AM Thank you!

Agnes Krampe April 17, 2017 at 9:29 PM Congrats on your win, Sushma. Lovely L-words. Sushma A. Singh April 18, 2017 at 6:20 AM Thanks, Agnes! Sushma A. Singh April 18, 2017 at 6:20 AM Thanks, Agnes!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 16, 2017 at 12:48 PM - Lovely pleiades, Sushma :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phil Capitano April 14, 2017 at 7:53 AM Nice one Sushma, good luck in the contest. Sushma A. Singh April 14, 2017 at 8:05 AM Thank you!