Lilacs

senses wooed at dusk gently held by spring’s bouquet- lilac’s perfumed waltz

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Faye Gibson

Date: 6/8/2014 3:42:00 PM

Beautiful, David. I love to walk outside and immediately have my senses attacked by some sweet perfume...especially lilacs. Thanks for your visit to my "At Gettysburg."

Paul Callus

Date: 5/24/2014 3:40:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, David! pleasant appeal to sight and smell. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2014 9:06:00 PM

a beautiful mixing of senses.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2014 1:36:00 PM

David, beautiful....Linda

David Mohn
Date: 5/21/2014 6:13:00 PM

Thank you Linda...always a pleasure :)

Nathan D.

Date: 5/21/2014 11:00:00 AM

great haiku

David Mohn
Date: 5/21/2014 12:47:00 PM

Thank you Nathan...I appreciate you stopping by