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Lilac and Rose View

Lilac and rose view
DEATH of the day approaching....
Rock wake commencing

© Apr 27 2010
For Raul's "Vanilla Sky" contest

naturehaiku

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Sharon Winter

June 13, 2010 at 3:49 PM

wow. I really can connect to this amazing haiku for personal reasons. very beautiful and unique. thank YOU, for sponsoring your contest kind sir. all the best, shar

Sheol Moribund

May 7, 2010 at 9:37 AM

Good day to you Charles: Fantastic poem.

Mitch White

April 25, 2010 at 8:54 PM

Good to see it here- Congrats on your win Charles

April 25, 2010 at 8:02 PM

What an interesting perspective on the picture. I like the way the second and third lines work together. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen