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like wind chimes the tenebrous fate of society's downtrodden h a n g s on a slender thread threatening to snap, tugged even tighter by the elephantine weight of their woes. sad, though... it's sad we don't listen to their anguished c r i e s like we attentively do the mellisonant tunes of wind chimes. how come? Submitted for... Simile Poetry Contest Sponsored by Hilo Poet Date written: 08/07/2022

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Date: 8/18/2022 9:58:00 AM
Edward, the depth of your compassion comes through with a stunning clarity my friend. I love the contrast to your focal biblical verse. The formatting of the poem so reinforces your words. Congratulations on your win. Blessings to your heart and pen.
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Date: 8/7/2022 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations on this winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Life is not easy for some people but even worse for others. Someday it will all be made right. Sara
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/7/2022 2:13:00 PM
Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Sara:-) I echo your sentiments!
Date: 8/7/2022 12:17:00 PM
I often wonder as a society and even as an individual are we doing enough or are we just happy to look the other way and pretend we don't notice. Tom
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/7/2022 12:25:00 PM
I'd go with the latter part, Tom. I find our laissez-faire attitude quite heartbreaking. We should be doing a LOT more to help the downtrodden pull themselves up from their dire circumstances.
Date: 8/7/2022 11:31:00 AM
Edward, you have conveyed a powerful message in this lovely poem. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/7/2022 12:13:00 PM
Thank you very much indeed, Janice:-)
Date: 8/7/2022 8:40:00 AM
Edward, your great feelings are a manifestation of the wonderful and kind spirit that is inside you. Thank you for sharing them. A pleasant read that is packed with information that may be passed on! I am grateful that you shared this.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/7/2022 12:14:00 PM
Thanks so much, Lasaad:-) I appreciate the wonderful feedback and visit!

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