Like What You See, Mister --

The daily rag's a painted lady
    her poses alluring
    her promises assuring
      ~ her goods rarely enduring
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April 7, 2021 at 5:48 PM
This is such a good write my friend. I agree with Caren, it can go in several directions. Good show. God Bless, JB
Wolf Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 6:14 PM
The problem, I guess, is when this poem veers off into several erections. (Oh, I just couldn't resist this one). ~ Big Bad Wolf
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April 6, 2021 at 11:45 AM
Looking forward to part two lol. Tom
Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 5:45 PM
Part two costs more, Tom! lol. Thanks, gw
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April 6, 2021 at 8:53 AM
This could be taken a few interesting directions; I am enjoying it .
Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 5:45 PM
All roads lead to Rio -- Bob Hope and Dorothy Lamour
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