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Like Those Still Waters

still running deep: like the calm before the storm: like glittering veins of fool's gold, a mirage beneath the desert sun: friendship, camaraderie, only politics-deep, only religion-deep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/17/2019 8:35:00 AM
Sharp ink! Cut to the quick. xomo
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Gary Onderisin
Date: 2/18/2019 3:33:00 AM
Thanks again, Maureen. And forgive me: I accidentally deleted your first comment on my poem here; I'm not very good at computer skills. So I posted my first reply to you where your "Big Top Polka Dots" has been published in Poetry Soup. Peace, Gary
Date: 2/16/2019 11:02:00 AM
Well done Gary :)
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Gary Onderisin
Date: 2/17/2019 5:18:00 AM
Thanks for the feedback, Heidi, and for your, to name but one of your poems, beautifully lyric, philosophical "There for you to see". Peace, Gary

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