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Like the River Flows

I have loved you long
With a love that is strong
Like a river flows deep and wide
Or the rise and fall of the tide 

Now that I am old
Has your love grown cold
You were once in love 
A gift to me from above

Will love's desire rekindle
In the latter years that dwindle
Will the snow on the mountain
Fizzle in warm hearth's fountain

Rhythm of Once In Every Life by Ronnie Milsap
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kerr Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 11:24 PM
A superb lyric poem of the highest quality, Sara. It flows with relish, rhymes so well. Thank you for posting this Howard
Kendrick Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 5:33 AM
Howard, your comments are reassuring. I remember writing that one for some reason even though it has been 9 years since I wrote it. Sara K
Chaudhary Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 10:33 AM
I can hear the song of your poem's river. Nice work.
Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 11:24 AM
Ahh!! Thanks for the generous review..I appreciate you dropping by..Sara
Sivey Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:55 AM
This is so beautiful my friend! Your flow within this incredible poem is delicately perfect! You have mastered this type of poem quite nicely Sara, I'm impressed by your glorious skill! Thank you for posting this awesome piece, Great Work!!
Kendrick Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 11:16 AM
Russell, Thanks for the delightful review of my work..How are you doing..Have you recuperated from your fall?? Well, this one is not my usual poulter's measure but I tried to time it to match the time of the song..Have a great day..Sara
Michael Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 5:53 PM
You make me smile Sara... Is time, more important than quality? Enjoyed your poem...Have a nice evening
Kendrick Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 11:14 AM
Micheal, Quality of love is the most important with some people getting a long time together with good quality and some getting a long time together with poor quality..For most couples there are good times and bad times but if one works through the bad times then the good times are very special.Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent here..Sara
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 4:18 PM
A love song well depicted -- apt questions at the end!
Kendrick Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 11:11 AM
Vijay, Will love fizzle in hearth's fountain??? I hope not..Thanks for the kind review..Sara
One Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 3:29 PM
Sad reality of some relationships over time.. your poem flows very well..
Kendrick Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 11:10 AM
SO, Just a made up one..I see many couples sitting in restaurants non-communicating...Sad to see but sometimes they are just comfortable with each other and sometimes it is they are not interested in each other anymore..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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