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Treasure

Like Soft Rain

Too many a rosy sweet Penney took my mind away from loving you but in December snowflakes of pristine white flew memories like photographs to my heart and drew a line back in time where love remains now you are in my veins like soft rains
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 4, 2025 at 6:22 PM
you did well following the rhyme scheme and syllable pattern. Liked the flow
Achara Avatar
December 4, 2025 at 7:36 PM
Thank you. It was fun to write.
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