Panagiota Romios Poet Rhyme

Like Smoke Through a Keyhole

Like Smoke Through a Keyhole


Live each day as though it might
be your last.
Savor each drink in lifes repast.

As our lives pass so quickly,
like smoke through a keyhole.
Love your God and all people.

Leave bitterness outside your
heart and gate.
What awaits you, is a shining fate.


           October 26, 2019

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Harry Horsman October 28, 2019 at 12:55 AM Oh the message here is so positive, love this. Panagiota Romios October 28, 2019 at 4:16 AM Harry!! Thank you very much for taking your time for say so.

P.S. Awtry October 27, 2019 at 10:56 PM "smoke through a keyhole" -- Wow! That is just a fantastic phrase. And what a powerful message! Panagiota Romios October 28, 2019 at 4:14 AM Hello! PS... So pleased you like this, PR

Robert Lindley October 27, 2019 at 11:38 AM You my friend, gift such magnificent poetry-- words that are on point, deep, profound and an inspiration. Closing reminds us that bitterness fosters agony and heartache-- yet forgiveness entices Light to show us a happier, far better path to take! A fav-- a jewel that please eye, heart, mind , soul and sincere poetic appreciation! Panagiota Romios October 27, 2019 at 8:29 PM Robert~ so appreciative of your Comments. That forgiveness section is the hardest. Letting go of those who harmed us or plan to, frees us to forge ahead. Let God take care of them. I have yet to see that fail.))) Panagiota xxz

Silent One October 27, 2019 at 4:08 AM Great message! Panagiota Romios October 27, 2019 at 4:35 PM Really, wowzers...thank you, sweet Silent One. PR xxx

Line Gauthier October 26, 2019 at 9:50 PM Charming poem, Panagiota. Love the imagery of the keyhole symbol. Panagiota Romios October 27, 2019 at 4:33 PM Bless you, loveless Line! Xxx

Gershon Wolf October 26, 2019 at 8:31 PM 'Savor each drink in life's repast' and the title line, … 'like smoke through a keyhole:' Wow. Great lines; great imagery, Panagiota. Two thumbs way up for this one. Warmest wishes, Gershon Panagiota Romios October 26, 2019 at 8:47 PM Oh, how great a Gershonian thumbs up! My life is now complete! Merci, Panagiota xxx

Ts Poetry October 26, 2019 at 7:42 PM Words to live by Panagiota Romios October 26, 2019 at 8:09 PM Thank you for Replying TS. Have a happy weekend Panagiota