Like Feeling In Palm

softness of head's hairs
                                          grasses' heads if one caress
                                                 like feeling in palm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 1:47 PM
the feeling is like magic ~SKAT~
Devnath  Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 12:12 PM
Thanks a lot for reading my old poem, my lovely friend, and for your uplifting comment. Loved always, bl
Onclaud Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 1:31 AM
i like the comparison appraoch here, bl... powerful 'ku.. enjoyed!..:) hugggs
Dietrich Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 12:10 PM
this is ADORABLE. comparing hair to grass. Love it.
Carrillo Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 11:23 AM
Hi Bi; A few words can say so much. Good Haiku. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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