John Gondolf Poet Dizain

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Like Diamonds In the Trees

Like Diamonds in the Trees

The freezing rain fell through the night
as Mother Nature cast her curse
and in the morn the world affright.
The chilling sight seemed so adverse;
a frozen wasteland getting worse.

But sunrise on the second day
found Mother Nature’s new display
as in the trees with icy tone
reflections in the sun’s bright ray
like diamonds on the branches shown.


February 6, 2022
Dizain

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Emilia James May 20, 2022 at 10:56 AM Simply beautiful John. Had a fairly mild winter in my corner of the world but would loved to of seen these diamonds where I live...maybe next winter. Emilia. P.S. I would still buy your book if you ever published your poems John. John Gondolf May 21, 2022 at 2:46 AM Thank you for the sweet comment, Emilia, if I ever do publish a book I will send you a signed copy, you have always been one of my biggest supporters. Hugs, John

Margarita Lillico February 9, 2022 at 7:29 PM In your best element, John! Speaking of diamonds in the trees, we have those into March and beyond, Mother Nature’s curse:) XO M. John Gondolf February 10, 2022 at 5:44 AM Thank you so much for your support, Maggie, I appreciate your comments. I couldn't survive in your part of the world. :) Hugs, John

Connie Marcum Wong February 8, 2022 at 1:27 AM Oh, this is just beautiful John. Perfect rhyme with outstanding stunning imagery. I am trying to write my first, but so far I have no clue. I know this is going to fair really well in the contest. I love it! xxoo John Gondolf February 8, 2022 at 2:52 AM Thank you, Connie, I’m glad you enjoyed it. I have always found Dizains difficult but I found that splitting it in two made it easier. Hugs, John

Brandy Nicole February 7, 2022 at 6:16 PM "like diamonds on the branches" There is something magical about such a moment, when ice adorns our world. As the sun lingers, causing the ice to glisten and then softly melt away, it is such a beautiful sight. You have painted a lovely picture with your words, my dear sweet friend. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy John Gondolf February 8, 2022 at 2:34 AM Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Brandy, I appreciate your support. It really was beautiful with the sun reflecting off the ice but nevertheless I am ready for Spring ! Hugs, John