Jeanne Mcgee Poet Verse

Like Dawn

yellow day-lily’s grow
to glow like a van Gogh

pretty petals like tongues
with glee they bloom when young

reflect on ponds surface
perfect spring disturbance

but gone by tomorrow
like dawn ~ a fleeting show



7-11-2020    N/A
Verses In Essence - 8 Lines
Joseph May   

8-9-2020
N-A rerun 10 Poetry Contest
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Sandra Adams June 30, 2020 at 3:28 PM such beautiful imagery in this one, short but bursts like an early morning horizon … wonderful write... hugs

Winged Warrior June 30, 2020 at 4:03 AM Well executed verse Jeanne...short sweet and packed with imagery...poetic hugs...^WW^ :o)

Jan Allison June 30, 2020 at 3:07 AM what superb imagery - love the rhyme scheme ( to the british ear Van Gogh sound more like cough but i know its different in the US) adding this to my faves its charming:-) hugs jan xx

Caren Krutsinger June 30, 2020 at 12:04 AM Some flowers are glowingly beautiful for an unbelievably short duration. Well done.

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 29, 2020 at 11:42 PM A golden delight! I enjoyed this poem, with its beautiful imagery.