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Like Dawn

yellow day-lily’s grow to glow like a van Gogh pretty petals like tongues with glee they bloom when young reflect on ponds surface perfect spring disturbance but gone by tomorrow like dawn ~ a fleeting show
7-11-2020 N/A Verses In Essence - 8 Lines Joseph May 8-9-2020 N-A rerun 10 Poetry Contest John Hamilton sponsor

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Date: 6/30/2020 3:28:00 PM
such beautiful imagery in this one, short but bursts like an early morning horizon … wonderful write... hugs
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Date: 6/30/2020 4:03:00 AM
Well executed verse Jeanne...short sweet and packed with imagery...poetic hugs...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 6/30/2020 3:07:00 AM
what superb imagery - love the rhyme scheme ( to the british ear Van Gogh sound more like cough but i know its different in the US) adding this to my faves its charming:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/30/2020 12:04:00 AM
Some flowers are glowingly beautiful for an unbelievably short duration. Well done.
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Date: 6/29/2020 11:42:00 PM
A golden delight! I enjoyed this poem, with its beautiful imagery.
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