Deborah Burch Poet Rhyme

Like Coming Home

"Lovers don't finally meet somewhere. They're in each other all along." ~Rumi



Entangled eons collided

     Where familiar hearts resided

          The day our eyes engaged.

               And a quickening abided:

                    I'd loved you long unsighted--

                         Like coming home assuaged. 



~by deborah burch©
4/28/2012

*Rime Couee
Title: "Like Coming Home"

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Kash Poet July 22, 2012 at 8:35 PM SOUPMAIL......

Nette Onclaud May 5, 2012 at 12:10 AM thank you for joining, dear deborah... nice one.. soup mail!..:)huggs!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 29, 2012 at 1:42 AM Hi Deb! I truly love the quote you chose here-- heehee I actually never heard of Rumi but this one is so nice! And you've complemented the quote really qell with your rime couee-- never tried that form either but you I think did wonderful with it :D Lucky are they who find "home"-- really like your first line here btw-- I wish you the best in nette's contest & congrats on all your wins! :D Deborah Burch April 29, 2012 at 7:24 AM Thank you soooo much Nikko!! :) I am honoured...and I love your new avitar! lol ...big hugs,love~deb :)

Pace Ink-U-Script April 28, 2012 at 6:32 PM Good luck in the contest...love this rhyme and how you have it set up..hugs..INK-U-SCRIPT Deborah Burch April 28, 2012 at 6:39 PM :) thank you dear one...deb

Carolyn Devonshire April 28, 2012 at 3:54 PM You chose a wonderful quote from Rumi, Deb, and I love the way you describe falling in love. Winning wishes for you in the contst, my friend. Love, Carolyn Deborah Burch April 28, 2012 at 4:08 PM O' thank you Carolyn :) how gracious and kind you are! It means so much. I am honoured. big hugs, love,deb

Michael J. Falotico April 28, 2012 at 3:01 PM I love this !! Excellent piece my dear sweet poet. Hugs Michael Deborah Burch April 28, 2012 at 3:11 PM Awwww. :) Thank you Michael! I am honoured! big hugs, love,deb