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Like Coming Home

"Lovers don't finally meet somewhere. They're in each other all along." ~Rumi Entangled eons collided Where familiar hearts resided The day our eyes engaged. And a quickening abided: I'd loved you long unsighted-- Like coming home assuaged. ~by deborah burch© 4/28/2012 *Rime Couee Title: "Like Coming Home"

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Date: 7/22/2012 8:35:00 PM
SOUPMAIL......
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Date: 5/5/2012 12:10:00 AM
thank you for joining, dear deborah... nice one.. soup mail!..:)huggs!
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Date: 4/29/2012 1:42:00 AM
Hi Deb! I truly love the quote you chose here-- heehee I actually never heard of Rumi but this one is so nice! And you've complemented the quote really qell with your rime couee-- never tried that form either but you I think did wonderful with it :D Lucky are they who find "home"-- really like your first line here btw-- I wish you the best in nette's contest & congrats on all your wins! :D
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/29/2012 7:24:00 AM
Thank you soooo much Nikko!! :) I am honoured...and I love your new avitar! lol ...big hugs,love~deb :)
Date: 4/28/2012 6:32:00 PM
Good luck in the contest...love this rhyme and how you have it set up..hugs..INK-U-SCRIPT
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/28/2012 6:39:00 PM
:) thank you dear one...deb
Date: 4/28/2012 3:54:00 PM
You chose a wonderful quote from Rumi, Deb, and I love the way you describe falling in love. Winning wishes for you in the contst, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/28/2012 4:08:00 PM
O' thank you Carolyn :) how gracious and kind you are! It means so much. I am honoured. big hugs, love,deb
Date: 4/28/2012 3:01:00 PM
I love this !! Excellent piece my dear sweet poet. Hugs Michael
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/28/2012 3:11:00 PM
Awwww. :) Thank you Michael! I am honoured! big hugs, love,deb

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