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Like Butter

Churning like butter
Thoughts of you
Bright and yellow

hopelovesenryu

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Apoorva Patrikar

March 12, 2013 at 7:42 AM

strong word! congrats on ur win

Ralph Taylor

March 7, 2013 at 4:27 PM

Congrats, Susan. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

March 6, 2013 at 9:40 PM

SUSAN, ;-) congratulations with your awesome win, in my contest. always~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

May 2, 2012 at 7:14 PM

ha,, like butter.. this is the proper title.. for someone whom melts you and warms you and shines you.. bright and yellow.. mmmm butter.. bet your thoughts stir pretty much.. excellent ..pd

Harry Horsman

April 22, 2012 at 4:51 AM

brilliant Senryu, this is so clever Susan. harry

Karen Croft

April 20, 2012 at 7:19 PM

i like!!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 17, 2012 at 9:49 AM

That last line sure gives it such a witty twist! I didn't know what to expect when I read your title Susan, and I love how it turned out :D Made me smile!