Like Butter

Churning like butter
Thoughts of you
Bright and yellow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/12/2013 7:42:00 AM
strong word! congrats on ur win
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Date: 3/7/2013 4:27:00 PM
Congrats, Susan. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/6/2013 9:40:00 PM
SUSAN, ;-) congratulations with your awesome win, in my contest. always~ LINDA
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Date: 5/2/2012 7:14:00 PM
ha,, like butter.. this is the proper title.. for someone whom melts you and warms you and shines you.. bright and yellow.. mmmm butter.. bet your thoughts stir pretty much.. excellent ..pd
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Date: 4/22/2012 4:51:00 AM
brilliant Senryu, this is so clever Susan. harry
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Date: 4/20/2012 7:19:00 PM
i like!!!
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Date: 4/17/2012 9:49:00 AM
That last line sure gives it such a witty twist! I didn't know what to expect when I read your title Susan, and I love how it turned out :D Made me smile!
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Date: 4/16/2012 10:52:00 PM
wow, this is so clever. You are getting to be the master of very short and cute free verse!(I think maybe it could be senryu!)
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Black Eyed Susan
Date: 4/17/2012 7:10:00 AM
I debated on senryu or free verse. Looks like it should be a senryu. majority rules :)
Date: 4/16/2012 4:16:00 PM
Wow, I like this a lot! It could be a senryu, maybe? Just brilliant! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 4/16/2012 8:50:00 AM
This so nice. Kathy
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