For Miranda Hawley's 12 Lines Or Less Ridiculous Comparisons Poetry Contest
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When a poem you write is like a toy car, it’s all wound up (vroom vroom) to take the reader far. If it’s much too short, give the poem gas. More words are the fuel you’ll need to amass. If it’s way too long, your poem might sputter. Add it then to your other toy car clutter. When your poem, like a car, runs smoothly – assume it will take folks for a ride with a zipitty zoom zoom.
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