Like a Sad Country Song

My life is but a sad country song
day after day of things gone wrong.
Their love, fake, not pure like mine,
No surprise they couldn't walk the line.
Pick my head up just to move on,
Back to lonely from dusk to dawn.
True love is when you both feel the same,
Giving of rings and sharing a name.
Best friends to each other,
Future father and mother.
Forever by each others sides,
Taking life like the ocean tides.
Understanding the feelings of both,
Watering loves roots for growth.
To simply say I love you
With a feeling that is new,
Truly feeling the words spoken
Knowing it's not just a promise to be broken. 
Only then will you know,
Being with you is not just for show.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 16, 2011 at 12:19 PM
Enjoyed. Charlotte
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May 16, 2011 at 11:37 AM
beautiful
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