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This is a rewrite and a reshape of a poem previously posted. I thought I would do another shape when I accidentally found this one. I hope you enjoy reading or listening to it as much as I enjoyed  creating it. Lots Of Love, armand.

 

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Like a Moth To a Flame

================================================== u m b i l i c a l c o r d Is This Nature's Glory As a quarry? Alone and at peace A life, a new lease I pull up a piece of land Take a little time to mend This rainforest trembles An open window in shambles Sitting on my own made porch I fire up a configured torch Then lay under, should I say What is like a porch light ray And I wait for that one moth Amongst butterflies sought An unwanted reject Like me ready to eject Take me now in this lush With the roar of death; a hush And I will go, amongst this gift Gods Eden unquestioned; my lift My life to stop the bleeding of the land So I protect this marvel, hold her hand In sincere motion - there is a fusion I can do I can do Never say can't So I must chant Let my body meld With this forest held tight Me alone a window into the future slightly opened Maybe we are all like moths to a flame - penned ==================================================
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Williams Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 7:36 AM
Loved the shape lending itself to the poem, what wonderful words Armand A7++... Maria
Inman Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 10:08 AM
Love shape poems, nicely done.
Chircop Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Loved the shape,voice and poem Armand...Excellent post indeed.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Very well done my friend!
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 3:42 PM
Loved hearing your voice reading this one, dear poet. I think you did a wonderful job with rhyming. it's out of your wheel house but you handled it well, and I just loved that last line. So beautiful. Fave.
Smith Avatar
November 1, 2016 at 1:37 PM
This is great my friend a moth amongst butterflies...perfect
Y. Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Hi Armand , I enjoyed the shape, the written word and you reading this beautiful piece. A undeniable seven and a fav. :-) Alexis
B. Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 6:20 PM
Such a deep and beautiful poem. So original and a beauty :) Love the shape as well. A fav,
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