Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Like a Gift From Above

Since I can not have what I am dreaming of,

A heavenly substitute I've picked for love.

Sweetness on my tongue; into my mouth I shove

The angel’s gift of chocolate. Its name is Dove!


 For Juli- Michelle's contest Rhyme Battle: Round 2

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Chris Hagy October 2, 2016 at 6:25 PM So glad I scrolled back to find this gem!...my favorite addiction is dove dark chocolate! Thank God for the chocolate:)

Cherl Dunn December 29, 2013 at 1:26 PM Love the part about chocolate, it sounds so deliclious so wonderful, but being a women we never turn down sweet treats right nice write above and thank you for making me hunger.lol cheri

Vincent Flannery December 28, 2013 at 6:16 AM Very witty and funny. Great write Andrea!

Kelly Deschler December 6, 2013 at 11:27 PM Another "sweet" poem about chocolate from you, Andrea! I know what you mean, though, I cannot resist a piece of chocolate, either! I enjoyed reading this poem tonight. Very nicely done!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. And I really do appreciate the fave! :)

Laura Breidenthal December 3, 2013 at 2:49 PM Very cute!! ^__^ Always, Laura

Joseph May December 2, 2013 at 5:32 PM lovely write Andrea....thank you for your sweet comments...love

Daver Austin November 26, 2013 at 1:41 PM I love chocolate. Don't care what color it is or what brand. You must be a kindred soul. Love, daver

Poet. Undertaker November 22, 2013 at 8:51 AM what an awesome poem Andrea. wonderful.(: ) New Santa.

Just That Archaic Poet November 22, 2013 at 7:33 AM lol This is great! Funny, clever and witty. Great job and I wish you the best of luck in the contest, Andrea! :)

Carrie Richards November 21, 2013 at 8:19 PM Yum..........you may have just sent me to my kitchen for a search !!!

Robert Johnson November 21, 2013 at 3:41 PM A perfect little rhyme for a perfect little chocolate. I'm always sneaking a piece of my sister's when I'm at her house. uuummm! :)

Matthew Anish November 21, 2013 at 8:53 AM One can gain weight just by looking at this poem! I love chocolate,too. Have you ever been to Hershy, Pa and seen the operation there? It is amazing! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2013 at 8:19 AM What if we had not chocolate... - Love it, Andrea. - Luck in contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama November 21, 2013 at 8:08 AM This is splendid and beautiful. Good write friend and keep the fire burning. its really nice coming across such a piece in a lovely day like this. Cheers! Funom Makama.

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu November 21, 2013 at 12:05 AM I admire doves a lot and I ascribe them to women of qualities. Thanks for ur lovely visits to my page my very good friend,I do appreciate. You are a raregem Andrea, Love alwaz Based On Belief.

Russell Sivey November 20, 2013 at 10:32 PM Yes! I love that Dove chocolate, and it does bring a heart warming feeling a love with it! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!

Debbie Guzzi November 20, 2013 at 5:51 PM mmmmm chocolate think I'll go get some! Thanks for liking my zombie poem! Light & Love

Honestly J.T. November 20, 2013 at 12:51 PM Very well penned. Good luck in the contest

Liam Mcdaid November 20, 2013 at 7:32 AM sweet beautifully penned piece

Sara Kendrick November 20, 2013 at 5:26 AM Cute one..Got a chuckle with this one's play on words..Thanks for the visit with congrats..Sara

Nette Onclaud November 20, 2013 at 4:27 AM okay i have a sweet tooth and you just wet my appetite for a sinful treat later, andie... heavenly piece with an awesome surprise!..:) huggles!

Mark Peterson November 20, 2013 at 12:09 AM I am deeply suspicious of anyone who doesn't like chocolate.Thankfully, you're not one of them. Chocolate--one of few words we have from Aztec (chocolatl), however, means "bitter water." Nothing could be farther from the truth.

Jon A Cavanaugh November 19, 2013 at 11:13 PM Love your poem. Love the subject.

Cherl Dunn November 19, 2013 at 9:24 PM Thank you for your comment I enjoyed writting it thank again. cheri

Cherl Dunn November 19, 2013 at 6:49 PM Thank you for the congrads on the beatles mania contest. Your poem above is wonderful and so true,chocolate rules

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