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Like a Gift From Above

Since I can not have what I am dreaming of, A heavenly substitute I've picked for love. Sweetness on my tongue; into my mouth I shove The angel’s gift of chocolate. Its name is Dove! For Juli- Michelle's contest Rhyme Battle: Round 2

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Chris Hagy

Date: 10/2/2016 6:25:00 PM

So glad I scrolled back to find this gem!...my favorite addiction is dove dark chocolate! Thank God for the chocolate:)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/29/2013 1:26:00 PM

Love the part about chocolate, it sounds so deliclious so wonderful, but being a women we never turn down sweet treats right nice write above and thank you for making me hunger.lol cheri

Vincent Flannery

Date: 12/28/2013 6:16:00 AM

Very witty and funny. Great write Andrea!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/6/2013 11:27:00 PM

Another "sweet" poem about chocolate from you, Andrea! I know what you mean, though, I cannot resist a piece of chocolate, either! I enjoyed reading this poem tonight. Very nicely done!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. And I really do appreciate the fave! :)

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/3/2013 2:49:00 PM

Very cute!! ^__^ Always, Laura

Joseph May

Date: 12/2/2013 5:32:00 PM

lovely write Andrea....thank you for your sweet comments...love

Daver Austin

Date: 11/26/2013 1:41:00 PM

I love chocolate. Don't care what color it is or what brand. You must be a kindred soul. Love, daver

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 11/22/2013 8:51:00 AM

what an awesome poem Andrea. wonderful.(: ) New Santa.

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 11/22/2013 7:33:00 AM

lol This is great! Funny, clever and witty. Great job and I wish you the best of luck in the contest, Andrea! :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/21/2013 8:19:00 PM

Yum..........you may have just sent me to my kitchen for a search !!!

Robert Johnson

Date: 11/21/2013 3:41:00 PM

A perfect little rhyme for a perfect little chocolate. I'm always sneaking a piece of my sister's when I'm at her house. uuummm! :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/21/2013 8:53:00 AM

One can gain weight just by looking at this poem! I love chocolate,too. Have you ever been to Hershy, Pa and seen the operation there? It is amazing! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/21/2013 8:19:00 AM

What if we had not chocolate... - Love it, Andrea. - Luck in contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama

Date: 11/21/2013 8:08:00 AM

This is splendid and beautiful. Good write friend and keep the fire burning. its really nice coming across such a piece in a lovely day like this. Cheers! Funom Makama.

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 11/21/2013 12:05:00 AM

I admire doves a lot and I ascribe them to women of qualities. Thanks for ur lovely visits to my page my very good friend,I do appreciate. You are a raregem Andrea, Love alwaz Based On Belief.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/20/2013 10:32:00 PM

Yes! I love that Dove chocolate, and it does bring a heart warming feeling a love with it! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/20/2013 5:51:00 PM

mmmmm chocolate think I'll go get some! Thanks for liking my zombie poem! Light & Love

Honestly J.T.

Date: 11/20/2013 12:51:00 PM

Very well penned. Good luck in the contest

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/20/2013 7:32:00 AM

sweet beautifully penned piece

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2013 5:26:00 AM

Cute one..Got a chuckle with this one's play on words..Thanks for the visit with congrats..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/20/2013 4:27:00 AM

okay i have a sweet tooth and you just wet my appetite for a sinful treat later, andie... heavenly piece with an awesome surprise!..:) huggles!

Mark Peterson

Date: 11/20/2013 12:09:00 AM

I am deeply suspicious of anyone who doesn't like chocolate.Thankfully, you're not one of them. Chocolate--one of few words we have from Aztec (chocolatl), however, means "bitter water." Nothing could be farther from the truth.

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/19/2013 11:13:00 PM

Love your poem. Love the subject.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/19/2013 9:24:00 PM

Thank you for your comment I enjoyed writting it thank again. cheri

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/19/2013 6:49:00 PM

Thank you for the congrads on the beatles mania contest. Your poem above is wonderful and so true,chocolate rules