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Like a Flower

Like a Flower So full of Love You gave it to me And how I dreamed of Holding you tight Smelling your sweet perfume Watching my smile Cause you to Bloom And when the Hardships came To water your Roots You drowned with the pouring Rain And washed away with our future pursuits. Like a Flower On Death's bed You utter your sweet last words But now... you're dead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/21/2011 10:21:00 PM
wow!!! that was a sad ending. i love your poem ,its lovely.thanks for sharing.
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Date: 8/21/2011 10:15:00 PM
A very deep poem.. and the comparison is strong! Thank you for sharing your poem, have yourself a wonderful night,..Linda
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