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Like a Demon Wailing For Redemption

i wander in the lonely corridors, looking for familiar faces, finding only memories of people who lived there, i stand in the clear blue sky gazing at the blue moon, the moon gazes back at me with the cool of its light,' the shrill of the flowing river fills the atmosphere, and i notice even the water is trying to escape surrounded by lethal smoke,i decide to indulge in it, and life once bright begins to show dark shades, all the glitter this place promised was fake, and i see others falling for this beautiful hell.. but now,nothing matters because IAM JUST LIKE A DEMON WAILING FOR REDEMPTION...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/21/2016 12:02:00 AM
harsh, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/22/2015 7:25:00 PM
HARSH :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 7/17/2011 5:25:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Harsh. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2011 8:38:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share creative poetry with luv.. as this gem of excellence luv..
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Date: 7/16/2011 6:05:00 PM
Nice personification, harsh
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