Like a Demon Wailing For Redemption

i wander in the lonely corridors, looking for familiar faces,
finding only memories of people who lived there,

i stand in the clear blue sky gazing at the blue moon,
the moon gazes back at me with the cool of its light,'

the shrill of the flowing river fills the atmosphere,
and i notice even the water is trying to escape

surrounded by lethal smoke,i decide to indulge in it,
and life once bright begins to show dark shades,

all the glitter this place promised was fake,
and i see others falling for this beautiful hell..

but now,nothing matters

because IAM JUST LIKE A DEMON WAILING FOR REDEMPTION...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 7:37 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 21, 2016 at 12:02 AM
harsh, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 22, 2015 at 7:25 PM
HARSH :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
Brown Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 5:25 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Harsh. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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July 16, 2011 at 8:38 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share creative poetry with luv.. as this gem of excellence luv..
Mehta Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 6:05 PM
Nice personification, harsh
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