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Lights, Camera, Poof

flicker ... flame up high ... now ... die

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Date: 12/2/2022 12:25:00 PM
sounds like me trying to get a bonfire to die.
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Date: 12/1/2022 4:37:00 PM
Oh, a scintilla of mayhem? LOL Pangie
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2022 8:22:00 PM
Better than a whole quintilla of mayhem! ~ Rare Chincilla
Date: 12/1/2022 4:15:00 PM
Makes me think of the volcano in Hawaii!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2022 8:21:00 PM
Hope it dies before it gets dangerous!!
Date: 12/1/2022 2:49:00 PM
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2022 8:21:00 PM
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Date: 12/1/2022 2:47:00 PM
A blip of thought, the fire has; caught!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2022 8:20:00 PM
heh, heh. Neat comment, Joe. Thanks!
Date: 12/1/2022 12:43:00 PM
In the blink of an eye. That is very true and cleverly put. Take care.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2022 8:15:00 PM
Winkin, BLINKIN, and nod: Flicker and Flame - two peas in a pod. ~ OMG
Date: 12/1/2022 11:10:00 AM
Life summed up in 6 words!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2022 8:11:00 PM
OK... I'll try to sum up Death in 3 (words). lol. ~ gw
Date: 12/1/2022 9:08:00 AM
Sounds like me trying to light a pilot light, gw. Grrrrrh.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2022 7:57:00 PM
Ha, ha. Me, too. But hey, we can try, try, and try again. (Or maybe cry!) :) gw

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