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Lights, Camera, Poof

flicker ...

   flame up high ...

     now ... die

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Caren Krutsinger

December 2, 2022 at 12:25 PM

sounds like me trying to get a bonfire to die.

Panagiota Romios

December 1, 2022 at 4:37 PM

Oh, a scintilla of mayhem? LOL Pangie

Gershon Wolf

December 1, 2022 at 8:22 PM

Better than a whole quintilla of mayhem! ~ Rare Chincilla

Kim Rodrigues

December 1, 2022 at 4:15 PM

Makes me think of the volcano in Hawaii!

Gershon Wolf

December 1, 2022 at 8:21 PM

Hope it dies before it gets dangerous!!

Joe Maverick

December 1, 2022 at 2:49 PM

Gershon Wolf

December 1, 2022 at 8:21 PM

Joe Maverick

December 1, 2022 at 2:47 PM

A blip of thought, the fire has; caught!

Gershon Wolf

December 1, 2022 at 8:20 PM

heh, heh. Neat comment, Joe. Thanks!

Shirley Hawkins

December 1, 2022 at 12:43 PM

In the blink of an eye. That is very true and cleverly put. Take care.

Gershon Wolf

December 1, 2022 at 8:15 PM

Winkin, BLINKIN, and nod: Flicker and Flame - two peas in a pod. ~ OMG

Becky Forbes

December 1, 2022 at 11:10 AM

Life summed up in 6 words!

Gershon Wolf

December 1, 2022 at 8:11 PM

OK... I'll try to sum up Death in 3 (words). lol. ~ gw

L Milton Hankins

December 1, 2022 at 9:08 AM

Sounds like me trying to light a pilot light, gw. Grrrrrh.

Gershon Wolf

December 1, 2022 at 7:57 PM

Ha, ha. Me, too. But hey, we can try, try, and try again. (Or maybe cry!) :) gw

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